# QC ARM 135

Sorry for the delay-edition

## Note on the full chapter

The blacks look overleveled. I'd use curves for making the very darkest grays lighter (say, 5 becomes ten) with everything else staying the same.

## PG 71

Is okay.

## PG 72

Looks overleveled, but that can probably not be helped.
Curves would help to get the dark greys a bit lighter without messing up the light greys.

## PG 73

All good.

## PG 74

All good.

## PG 75

All good.

## PG 76

All good.

## PG 77

All good.

## PG 78

Okay.

## PG 79

p2b1: Hyphens are to be at the end of line, so it should be Match-\nup.
p4b1: The centering is good, but looks off because dots are so small. I'd move the text a bit to the right.

## PG 80

p3b1: The text looks very dense. GIMP doesn't tell me about the line-height, but it does look reduced. I'd get it to standard levels (if it is, sorry for the bother)

## PG 81

p2b1+b2: Font size is too large.
p3b1: Same.
p3b2: Same, maybe. Ideally I'd try to get ...? on the previous line.

## PG 82

p2b1: Cool bubble o.o. I'd increase the size of ?! as in the raws.

## PG 83

All good.

## PG 84

p4b1: Should be in all-caps.

## PG 85

p1b1: Text is a bit large.
p4b1: Text is too small.

## PG 86

All good.

## PG 87

p2b1: The F in flying looks capitalized.

## PG 88

p1b1: I'd decrease the line height of the ... (not the rest) and then move the whole text to the bottom. Looks better.

## PG 89

All good.

## PG 90

All good.

## PG 91

All good.

## PG 92

All good.